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The Information of Iran
===The official name of Iran is Islamic Republic of Iran. Iran is a country that located in Western Asia. Countries that are near to Iran included Turkey, Iraq, Armenia, Azerbaijan, Pakistan and Turkmenistan. The area of the whole country is 1,648,195 km² with the number of population around 77 million. The capital of Iran is Tehran, which is the biggest city. People in Iran spoke many types of languages; there are Persian, Armenian, Kurdish, Azerbaijani, Lori, Gilaki, Balochi, Arabic and more. Persian is the official language. Iran is rich with petroleum and natural gas, which is their largest industry. ===

THE SITUATION OF REFUGEES IN IRAN
===Iran is hosting one of the largest refugee populations in the world, with nearly 900.000 registered Afghan refugees. It is becoming more and more difficult to obtain contributor funding for operations in Iran at a time when poverty among Afghan refugees is on the rise. === ===Afghans in Iran are mostly refugees who excape Afghanistan during the 1980s Soviet war as well as traders, business people, workers, exchange students, diplomats, tourists and other visitors. The ones designated as refugees are under the protection and care of the United Nations High Commissioner for Refugees (UNHCR), and provided legal status by the government of Iran. However, they cannot get Iranian citizenship or permanent residency, and live in Iran under time-limited condition of stay. ===

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My name is Matin Abbasi, I am a 15 years old boy. I came from Iran and I came to Malaysia in 2007. In that Time, I was 9 years old. Before my family and I came to Malaysia, we planned to go Australia. However, there was some problems made us can’t go there. Two years ago, in 2011, I came to Harvest Training Centre for study. In that time, I could not speak English as well as I do now. On the first day I came to Harvest Training Centre, I was scared because I can’t understand what they are saying as they speak English all the time. On the second day, it was one of the worst days in my life because I have to participate in the math exam. My result of the exam is bad, I only get 1 marks. It is not because of I am stupid. The reason is I only answer 1 question that I understood. I have asked my teacher to give me 1 week to prepare about the exam but they didn’t. Therefore, I decided to leave games and entertainment, study as hard as I can. 1 month after, I get a result with 29 out of 30. This made everyone excited. My teacher, Mr. Emanuel let me to be his assistant to help others student to understand his teaching. Few months later, I leave my class for some reason and I went to an Iranian school for 2 years. Study in the Iranian school was amazing. I had experienced the best days in my school life. The lesson was hard but it raised a lot of fun. But I came back to Harvest Training Centre because the school fee was expensive. When I back to Harvest Training Centre, I failed the assessment with a low marks, so I went to ALC class D. The classmates were not friendly. They didn’t join the opposite gender in class, so the class has only 2 group of student. The good thing is I meet Arash, he is my best friend and he is kind. I feel bored with the lesson because it is too easy for me. So, I decided to don’t waste my time and start study English. I learn 10 new words per day and it was really effective. My teacher realized that my level is different with others. They send me to another assessment but I have passed it and I join the Form 1 class. The lesson was hard as I join the class late and I have to push myself harder than others. The last thing that I want to say is I want to thanks my lovely mother who is the one who help me to success.

A golden Key Once upon a time, there was a charming prince which has a pair of bright and intelligent eyes, pinched nose and a pretty chubby face. The name of this handsome prince is Charlie. It was a capable person just likes his father. He came from a paradise almostly, it is Iran. It is the most beautiful wonderland in the world which is full of flowers, green mountains, beautiful fairly and little houses.  After a few years then, one day, it was raining heavily and the wind blow strongly that even happened in the wonderland. It was a rainstorm indeed. Those of the residents were forced to hide in their house and the animals felt panic about it. They are afraid that something was being happened to them. They realized that it was a sign. Suddenly, a witch came from a the rainstorm and there was a huge black cloud over there. The residents was shocked and frighten. They just felt breath out for what they have seen. The beautiful castle was being cursed. It became red in color and the sky became darkest. The castle was occupied by the witch and the charming prince was kicked out then. He became very poor and tried to survive in another village. He reached at a small town. All of the residents looked like hopeless, tired and they are put a long face. First at all, he didn’t know their culture and their language even though he tried to communicate with them. In case of he worked for them, he woke up very early in the morning to cook a special soup which was taken a long time. That’s why the residents loved him very much because of his hardworking however there didn’t know he was a prince before. There was a rainy night, Charlie was dreaming on his bed. ”Charlie! Charlie! Is me. Your mother.” She said. There was a really soft and familiar voice around his room. He was awake but groggy.” Oh! My dear mother, Is you? Why was you inside my room? It is really happy to see you.” Charlie said that. “My dear son, I knew that you were getting trouble and I were tried to help you. You can save our country only if you killed the witch by yourself. It is true hardly though you have to do your best.” His mother said. “ Mother, how can I kill the witch?” Charlie asked. “You have to find a golden key which can open a Pandora Box. The golden key was inside the castle, but then you have to cross the black forest before that.” It was dangerous! There are full of monsters, strange eyes appear in the dark and wolves are howling in the night.”

<span style="font-family: Cambria,serif; font-size: 14pt;"> Suddenly, his mother ‘s voice was vanish. <span style="font-family: Cambria,serif; font-size: 14pt;"> Charlie was awakened. He realized that his mother was given him a way to save his country. So, he started a plan. He has a best friend in this small town which is a big dragon named Genius. Genius can fly in the sky and spout out the fire. They plan together to cross over the black forest. <span style="font-family: Cambria,serif; font-size: 14pt;"> The witch has a beautiful daughter and her name is Venus. However, she is a kindness and helpful girl. She is lovely and innocent. She has a kind heart whereas her mother is a witch. One day, Venus met Charlie at the entrance of the forest. They fall in love with each other when their first met. Charlie and Genius had escaped from the black forest with a magic leave they ate. It can hide themselves by discovered from those strange eyes. Venus tried to help them because she knew that the witch wasn’t her real mother. Her mother was eaten by the witch. She was sad and angry. She tried to stole the golden key which is inside the witch’s room. It was risky to do that. She opened the heavy door and came inside the room. It was dark and a deep silent. In the corner of the room, it was a black rose on the table. “Stay away from the roses!” she remembered that the witch told her. She was afraid about it. She can see clearly there was a golden key in the middle of the rose. She raised up her hand to take the key. <span style="font-family: Cambria,serif; font-size: 14pt;">“Venus! What are u doing in my room?” there was a shout behind her. She was frighten of the weird sound. “Stay away from me! you had killed my mother.” She took off the golden key and the witch felt algetic and painful. Suddenly, she vanished with a black smoke. <span style="font-family: Cambria,serif; font-size: 14pt;">She quickly ran away from it, and passed the key to Charlie. Magically, the Pandora Box was opened. The sky become blue and cloudy, the rotten flowers is blooming again like previously. The most of the amazing thing is Genius become a white horse. The residents are happy and excited with it. Charlie and Venus are getting married. After then, the life of them is peacefully and full of happiness in the end. There was no war after Charlie administered the country.

===Two years ago a came to harvest training Centre. In that time i could not speak english as well as i do now. The first day i was very scared because i could`t understand what they are saying. The second day i had to participate in the math exam it was one of the worst day of my life, i got 1. Not because of i was stupid. I wrote 1 question that i understood. I told my teacher to give me a week to prepare for it but they did=== ===Not gave me that time, so i decided to leave game and playing , and study hard as i can. After 1 month i got 29 out of 30. That makes everyone excited. Then my teacher mr.emanuel makes me his assistant to teach or help them to understand what teacher teach them but after few month later i had to come out of my class for some reasons. I went to an Iranian school for 2 years .===

===It was amazing. I experienced the best days in school. While it was hard but a raised a lot of fun. Amazing then i had to come back here because the school was expensive. When i came back to harvest training Centre=== ===I failed the assessment with the minimum of marks, i went to ALC class D. But the classmates were not to friendly boys with boys girls with girls. But the good think is is meet arash my great friend he`s very kind. But i got bored their lesson were very easy so i decided to not waste any time and study english. 10 words per day. It was effective. The teachers realized that my level is different with them .they send me for other assessment the second assessment was same like the first one so i passed and came to form 1. Its hard for me because i came so late and i have to push myself harder them them and i will the last thing is i want to thank my lovely mother to help me to succes===